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Author Topic: I stand on the water...  (Read 4251 times)
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« on: July 02, 2006, 11:44:57 AM »

Here is a poem i wrote. Don't really know if it is apreciated here, but it would be interesting to hear what you guys think, and maybe even compose.

I stand on the water
A cold sensation
Racing up both legs
Heat is far form here
Dying to see
The sun rising
Standing there
The waves call
Swallowed by emptiness
Crashing and building
Rain trickles
On the surface
Ripple away
And ever are smooth
Jumping in his mind
Are names
I know them
But I canít recognize
The truth hiding
Behind the horizon
Shapes forms
Never existed here
It snows
It lies upon the water
A smooth surface
And for a moment
I freeze
And the sunburst
And the eyes burn
The horizon rushes
Everything is blurring
I feel the salty water
Shape in my lungs
They burst into pain
Thoughts rush by
Pictures playing movies
Life is depleted from my soul
And has departed my body.

*--_ Inspired by Goethe _--*
(written while listening: Opeth -- to bid you farwell)
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